Luck Was Not With Me Today

Luck Was Not With Me Today short poem

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I stepped outside my door
and without warning
Jack bit my cheek,
nose and mouth, so
when I chewed upon my
tongue lest I swore uncouth
words, my teeth bit
right through its core.
Blue blood flowed and
then, and only then I knew
what I had done. At least the words, I did not utter
the had stayed within.
I then turned tail and
decided, today I would miss
my stroll and walked straight
into the door. The key had froze
in the lock and blocked my return.
Luck was not with me today.

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I love writing and reading poems, not so much the classics these days but knew fresh stuff I find that exciting. New styles and new ideas. Some people paint, or write books or do crafts to get the inside out, me I do poetry and read the inside of folk I love to write fun and nature poems the best though.
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Rob J Mann
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Johanna, I can not imagine you even thinking about uttering profanities, but when Jack Frost bites I can sort of believe it !! To turn tail and find yourself ‘lucked out’ was very unfortunate..haha. Check start of line 12 – did you mean to say they not the?

Darren Scanlon
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Loved it. I think we all have days like those.

Nicely done, Johanna!

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