Compliment short poem

”I sojourn in your vibrant world, Mr. Ahmed
Of dulcet melodies and wafting aromas
The paintings adorning your house forlorn
Are as soothing as the breezes of the morn
I met your mates, your benevolent friends
Savoured their enchanted, beguiling tales
I relish dancing in e’ery drizzle, e’ery rain
Yet your rues quiver in my bosom in pain
My eyes blur in the glum lengthy nights
But gleam merrily in the sunlight again
I stay at your land in deep bliss and glee
How do you grace each spot so prettily?”

”Welcome to my wonderland, Ms. Susane
Of colours embellish’d with mellow melodies
And balmy gardens of blue roses so redolent
That spellbind one with their sweet scent
I grace my land with butterflies that dance
In the widest garden, where I solely dwell
I summon my fellows when I need them
And they sing with me my heartfelt anthem
The tourists do fancy my world, and I
Garnish my land with their precious praises
Thank you for your compliment, dear guest
Savour your visit here, be merry and rest”

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Muhammad Farhan Ahmed

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I was born in Rawalpindi, Pakistan. I started writing at the age of 11. I am a passionate poet and I use the power of my heart and my imaginations to write poems. I've been writing poetry for five years. I initially wrote free-verse poetry but I was inspired by William Wordsworth's poems and then I switched to rhythmic poetry. I am a poet of emotions and sentimentality. I embellish my thoughts and ideas by adding several metaphors, idioms, and similes. In 2013, I participated in an inter-school poetry competition in which I was awarded the first prize. I'm hoping to publish a book which compiles up all my poems, called ''Farhanite''. In my opinion, being a poet is like living in a world of dreams and inner visualizations, that you turn into words adorned by beautiful metaphors, similes, idioms, and rhymes. Poetry is a tool that completely changes your personality, your style, your ambitions, and in short, you.
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Compliment short poem

They talked regularly on the phone, They just can’t stay at their home They decided to take a step forward, And finally, they met afterward, When their eyes finally met, The time around them slept, When he spoke his first