@sayyeda_jahagirdar, such fatalistic words: “fate cannot be changed” or “they chose to succumb” that you have written. As if there is already something written in the stars that has to be fulfilled. Another word recalled to mind is “destiny.” Was it not Shakespeare who said in one of his plays, “the fault dear Brutus, lies not in our stars, but in us who are underlings.” The Christians believe in free will that is granted to every soul. The Easterner’s concept of “karma” that binds the spirit to repayment of past debts in the next reincarnation is also in consonance with the thought that everyone is free to choose his action so long as he is accountable for it in this life or the next. So how will Fate predestine our lives? Pardon, but we got carried away in the philosophical aspect of your poem. What we would say is that you have here a thought-provoking write.
Why in every relation Coming our way Beginning with its amazing intensity The warmth the coziness Like morning suns ray And just when you feel Comfortable settling It starts to wither away Falling like leaves of autumn day What is
A young girl stood tall But was ready to fall A young boy stood strong But had been for too long Little did they know A plan was made long ago They were to be an earthquake They were to
Love letters from L.A. so sweet Every line makes my heart skip A beat, I know someday we will Be together because I believe The heart can bridge any distance No matter the miles that separate Us today, no and
To stay in peace Shun going clinics, Never do any such Need to near police. For the first Be used to walks And light exercises To stay fit, For the second Never ever argue To avoid any rift. Both save
We see good and evil in our world. To make sense of it great myths of the light and the dark have been born. Great stories down through the eons have flowed, great battles fought, forever being told. Gods in
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@sayyeda_jahagirdar, such fatalistic words: “fate cannot be changed” or “they chose to succumb” that you have written. As if there is already something written in the stars that has to be fulfilled. Another word recalled to mind is “destiny.” Was it not Shakespeare who said in one of his plays, “the fault dear Brutus, lies not in our stars, but in us who are underlings.” The Christians believe in free will that is granted to every soul. The Easterner’s concept of “karma” that binds the spirit to repayment of past debts in the next reincarnation is also in consonance with the thought that everyone is free to choose his action so long as he is accountable for it in this life or the next. So how will Fate predestine our lives? Pardon, but we got carried away in the philosophical aspect of your poem. What we would say is that you have here a thought-provoking write.