I bring you fire

I bring you fire short poem

Fire smoulders and branches crackle which smears the ground blackish grey ashen
Feed these flames that rise and dance around naked orange red and blue with passion
The ascension lifts hearts to warm our blood to create a vital archaic light fashion
Inside your eyes dilate when in it’s fury and glorious rage as lives are a mere distraction
To hold all of this force and use it with wisdom is and always will be an attraction
Gold and silver streams through it like liquids poured by an artist to craft imagination
Fire is power to change like a chameleon and strengthen the hold of fascination
Too strong to touch because we burn in it’s wake of complete and utter destruction
Lust fools the mind to think of love but fire’s heat distracts in it’s constant illusion
A single flame can light the way to heaven or can leave you in total confusion
So dance yes dance and forever we will live in awe but learn of it’s manifestation

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Christopher S. Bunch
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You need to work on your formatting. This needs more stanzas, and the rhymes could have been so much better. This seems “rushed” in a way… The equilibrium is off entirely. Don’t be discouraged, however, but let this fuel your desire to do better.

I can see your talent, and it shines very brightly… But the lack of stanzas, and the rushed rhymes cloud that talent.

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