Who are you really?

Who are you really? short poem

Born with name to define your existing presence

Words with which carry greater in essence

The day arrives when name is your flawed deference

Mother father chained me down against poor resistance
Cultural rites manifests my primordial consistence
Ignorance of both is a formula for a wasted existence
Only when ceded to this name are you released by persistence?
A name but a statistic of a criminal offence on a child’s response to an intolerant resistance
Systematically herded like sheep to a point of insistence

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