Loyalty short poem

I think your heartbeats
are more loyal than you,
because when I hugged you,
last night, they already warned me
that you will be leaving me today,
thus see, I’m not hurt
Or simply I have no more tears to shed now..

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I have a dream.. A dream about making people aware of my poems... For me,poem is a divine feeling.. Something that comes by itself.. No hard thought..and no hard invention.. I write to help people know that this life is a mystery.. You read, you understand it your way... Others read, they understand it their way... Life is a poem...a mysterious one....
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@ Keshavii The girl in the picture might have spoken the exact same words before giving that look. Kudos to you and to EB which has selected the picture, for it is difficult to say where one ends and the other starts.