Bid me go..

Bid me go.. long poem

When darkness comes calling,

When the secret missive is sent,

then shall I seek from you,

the answers unsought for life..

When it is time to depart,

when death do us part,

then will I look to you

for that look you once had..

When the wind dies out,

and this body is laid to rest,

then will I feel the breath

that took mine away?

When the lights are dimmed,

and hope shines no more,

then will I see that gleam

which was my guiding light?

When the road is empty,

and the travelers are all gone,

then will your footsteps

match mine, one last time?

When the inn is closed,

and the last supper eaten,

then will you feed my hungry soul

with the words I yearned for?

When the trees are all bare,

and the garden glows no more,

then will that last leaf fall

and gently caress us once more?

When the birds have flown away,

to lands unseen unsung,

then will you ask the lonely lark

to sing my dirge to me?

When the choir voices die out,

when music lies shrouded,

then will you sing your serenade

before I hear no more?

When from this land I go,

when you will hold me no more,

then will you clasp me close

and send me away again?

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When the heydays fade away, and the tide is about to turn,
then we shall return to the days, where we had beautifully begun.
What a wonderfully woven piece! There won’t be one soul who cannot relate to this poem. An intense longing, epitomized by the passing of time.
Bet this poem will leave you with a nostalgic afterthought.
Your pen has just created magic Nupur!

Reyvrex Questor Reyes
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The pleasant contradictions bring a sense of interest for the reader to follow up where the lines would lead to. Thus you have ensnared its attention and make it cognizant of the wit and beauty of your poem.

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