Oh Kashmir (revised)

Oh Kashmir (revised) long poem

Uploaded by Ramapriya Nr

Paradise on Earth they say is Kashmir
Nature’s Gift to mankind they say is Kashmir
Abode of God they say is Kashmir

That there is existence of God , all believe universally
That worshipping of God in different names is factually
That different sects follow different Religion is the reality
That all the Religions have common goal that is of peace and tranquillity
That some sects feel superior to the other is the real tragedy

While the animals living in Kashmir have no qualms about the boundary
The so called human beings belonging to one sect trying
to suck the blood of the other sect to claim rights over the boundary

While the animals need to eat and drink blood of the other animal for survival
The human beings are shedding the blood of each other to destroy humanity

God gifted this heavenly abode for the Living being to enjoy his generosity
The Humans are fighting each other to claim rights over the heavenly abode
without realising one day the so called heavenly abode would turn out into place of Hell on earth
and God’s gift would become an irreversible curse

The day is not too far when the waters of scenic lakes turns Red with Blood of Humans

The day is not far when the Animals stop hunting the other for a square meal
when they get free meal of Dead Humans flesh and blood

The day is not far off when the fragrance of flowers is replaced by the stink of Human corpses

Oh God Why did you create this heavenly abode for human beings without making them humans ???

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I am a retired Engineer from the Government of Karnataka and now 64 year old. post retirement I fancied to write in 3 languages namely English,Hindi and kannada. I have written several poems,short stories etc and have published two books namely ""Tri bhasha Kritigalu and Rampys vision on lifes mission and now it has become passion for me to continue writing. I have also developed several software computer programmes covering Technical,medical and general programmes
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