Blue Revelation

Blue Revelation short poem

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Blue Revelation
Dark fate
Blue tears
Oh the heartbreak
Well and now the ones I
Loved are all gone and I am
All alone just like a ghost
In my own home as the days
And nights just drag on
Somewhere in between
Darkness and dawn
And the world keeps bringing
Me further down than usually
No one, nowhere to save me
No one, nowhere to love me
And it’s driving me crazy…well
And this Blue Revelation here
Of dark, dark fate
Of the bluest blue tears
And great, great heartbreak
No I can’t find anything to hold
Onto anymore crying naked on
The floor there is no open window
With the closing of the door
The soul and the heart at war
And it’s all because of this
Blue Revelation here
Of dark, dark fate
Outside the cold, cold rain
Where the bluest of blue tears
Fall in pain from this hard pressed

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Bo Lanier is from Chattanooga, Tennessee and has become an established poet with five books to his credit that were published in Canada. He received several achievement awards in creative writing through and has recently published two eBooks and one paperback book through After a nine year hiatus, Bo returned to publishing his poems with a new outlook and fresh ideas. His other talents include singing and songwriting.
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