Disillusioned


The day when I kept myself alone
Away from all the loved ones I have known
The peaceful sound of wind had a tone
What was the best thing that I had ever shown

Felt myself in a situation so low
Can’t decide which path to go
My mind turned like a snail so slow
All I could see were sign boards saying no

My mind and heart were tools with no feel
Tapped out that this situation will ever heal
God this isn’t what I had a deal
Now nothing is left even for me to steal

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Aloke
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Excellent execution. Fine cadence and diction

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