Suicide long poem

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I feel the pain come over me,
I wonder what I have done for this to be
You lived, a life of sadness
Leading you to do what you thought was best

Why did it happen to you,
I still wonder if it is even true
Maybe you’re still here,
Hiding away from life in fear

You hid away beneath your shell,
Smiling so hard that no-one could tell
Your body was melting within,
Leading you to commit the terrible sin

You held a gun up to your head,
You took deadly pills in your bed
In your mind you were the one that no-one could love
So you did it, and you drifted off, high above

You were filled with suicidal thoughts,
In your brain was a land of gunshots
You thought you had it hard, now look at me,
For all I know, you could be way out in the sea

I think of you sometimes,
I think of all your foolish crimes
I think of your laugh,
It’s something I haven’t seen enough

When I found out you were really gone,
I thought I was done
I lay down and cried,
I had lost you to suicide

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Hi i'm Saba Sitter i'm from Canada, I live in Indonesia and i'm 11 years old. I really like writing poetry so I use this website to submit a few of my poems but not all of them...
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A sad, intense poem. Cadence is remarkable.


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