Hi darren, just appreciating your beautiful words again, as the line; to be lost in a world of crying confusion has stayed with me.. so thanks for imprinting a part of you into my consciousness.
The best thing about the poem is that it is short and upto the mark. In fact the length of the poem is it’s strength. I enjoyed reading your poem which is interesting and definitely tells a lot of things.
Lost delights of mine, leave me not in unknown ways And all of our dandled days in my fortune’s hand Winder cold wails the wrong of death delays When cold wind blows into my desert sands She has turned within
Alone and unwanted. Unnecessary and useless. Unable to satisfy. In need of replacing. The heat of the moment. Now died down. Left unfeeling. Mind still racing. A touch once hot. The passion now gone. No longer needed. No more devoured.
I was so much into you That I lost my friends, My family and most importantly Myself. My dear you, You hurt me so much That I lost you, And I lost myself too. I was depressed, tensed here You
We who are born in our minuscule cradle in the cosmos see monsters. We see monsters in our cradle having been born with us. We see monsters coming at us from below. We see monsters in the great beyond. We
This is about someone special Someone so special that any special person could be to anyone And sharing with you about this special person Makes me feel special too I look back to the times I spent with him Where
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Beautiful….
Thanks Nikki
Hi darren, just appreciating your beautiful words again, as the line; to be lost in a world of crying confusion has stayed with me.. so thanks for imprinting a part of you into my consciousness.
The pleasure, indeed the honour, is surely mine. Thank you very much.
The best thing about the poem is that it is short and upto the mark. In fact the length of the poem is it’s strength. I enjoyed reading your poem which is interesting and definitely tells a lot of things.
Thank you very much, Aniket.