Ditched Love

Ditched Love long poem

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She was madly in Love with me
so was I in Love with her
We were couple made for each other

A whirl wind of gossip swept away our bonded love
A simple misunderstanding wreck havoc in our life
She believed in others here say and did not hear my say

Her ditching me set turmoil in my life
She turned a gentleman in me to a ruffian
She left me in the lurch and I was destined
to roam about like a street urchin with
wag abounds and Romeos as my companions
I may be sailing on sea water but that can never quench the thirst in my life

There may be thousands of ways out to reach ones destination but

all roads are closed for me to reach her destination

I am now left only to breathe and not to Live

Setting sun rises again erasing the darkness but sun in my life ditched me in

such a way I could never come out of darkness

I have been completely cut off from brightness of life

With no sight of light visible I took refuge in liquor drowning myself

to swim out of her daunting clutches

As I lay flat fully drunk I see a hazy figure of hers approaching me sobbing

and begging for forgiveness while I could feel my soul dancing in Ecstasy

and squeezing out of my body with last drops of left over tears flowing out happily

while she was unaware of my departure hugged my dead body tightly

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I am a retired Engineer from the Government of Karnataka and now 64 year old. post retirement I fancied to write in 3 languages namely English,Hindi and kannada. I have written several poems,short stories etc and have published two books namely ""Tri bhasha Kritigalu and Rampys vision on lifes mission and now it has become passion for me to continue writing. I have also developed several software computer programmes covering Technical,medical and general programmes
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Aloke
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Sweet, tragic love poem. Good cadence and imagery.

Teitei Stanley
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Wonderful!
Exactly what as happened to me and my girl. I speak to my mind with this poem. I like it….

Aysha Bhabha
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sad, it resonates with me

Bo Lanier
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a tragic story – nicely written, loved it.

ammu sachariah
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Nicely written .

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