Best Ever Made

Looking up, looking down.
I can feel my heart beat fast.
I can sense the betrayal by my conscious,
my feelings surrendering to him.

there is no escape point here,
but only the extraction point.
I tried to hide behind statues,
but his eyes could see through statues.

Laying excuses is what I planned to do.
he pointed a finger at my direction
and I fail to resist.
now I know why they call him Omnipresent,
Almighty and Omniscient.

How comfortable his arms were.
How lovely his voice was.
his presence feed my heart with joy.
surrendering to him was the Best decision I ever made.

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Lungelo Petros Buthelezi

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LUNGELO PETROS BUTHELEZI , A South African citizen was born in 1991-05-15. I grew up on the rural background and I was raised by a single parent. I grew up on the very poor family, on the year of 2012 I finished my Matric at MTHOMBOWESIZWE HIGH SCHOOL, and my teachers helped me in getting at university, since my family could not afford the registration fee. I am now doing level 3 in Bachelor of Education in the UNIVERSITY OF ZULULAND , i started writing while i was doing grade 9, since my high school used to encourage and promote talents. writing poetry is where I find joy
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Bo Lanier

nicely written, i like it. very encouraging write.


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