Hooked long poem

Uploaded by Milton Robertson

Smoke a little weed, drink a little drink, there’s nothing to it or so you think but before you keep going you need to take a good look because underneath there lies a hook. So you do a little here you do a little there the high is real good and you just don’t care, but before you know it your goose is cooked, the jonez is on ’cause you’ve been hooked. Now you are a child of the night and you know this is not right but the hook within controls your body and mind and will lead you the wrong way every time.

So you try to resist but to no avail because that hook has got you hooked and it’s taking you through pure hell. ’cause that is very deep and this is so true but that’s what you get when you deal with the Devil’s brew. Now the doctors will tell you that it’s a disease but it’s that hook that’s bringing you to your knees. Look how the hook is designed and it has a one track mind, It don’t know up only down and it will take your crown, then it will make you give up the fight and that’s when it will turn out the light.

You know it has to be removed only if you could but you can’t do it and it will even start to make death look good. Yes that hook is a very bad thing and this is no lie, take it for a joke and it will hang you out to dry. It will have you flopping around like a fish out of water, constantly bringing you down while making life harder and harder. But there is a way out if you would like to know and that is God is Good and He’s the way to go.

God will remove the hook and not just break the line while leaving the hook within and still driving you out of your mind. You see leaving the hook within and just breaking the line will have you going to meeting every day while praying to God, you don’t slip and lose your way. Lord Jesus died for us on the cross, He gave His life so we wouldn’t be lost. So you can turn to Lord Jesus when your life is in shambles or if something’s on you that you can’t handle.

So Think, before you do your next drug or take your next drink, STOP, take a good look because underneath there lies a HOOK.

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I once was walking in the dark , I thought I was living the life. Thank goodness for Rehab. They started to set thing right, It was there I found The Lord and and saw the Light. Now these poems I started to see and hear. When they come in sight I write. Thank You LORD. Now all the other, the past is, how they put it. Just water under the bridge. GONE. Never to return. Now I am Just a laid back kind of guy, Who's about to spread his wings and fly away to a brighter day.
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