Ups And Downs

Ups And Downs short poem

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“Life has ups and downs” said they,
So she endured all the pain without any debate…
Happiness will enliven her life soon,
She was told, if she will wait…

But gradually her hardship intensified further,
And those hopeful eyes still didn’t bother…

Joy did knock her door,
But it was too late…
The agony had swallowed her from top to toe,
And now people say it was her fate….

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Ramapriya Nr
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Dear Saloni ji,
A very good attempt to project the cruelest form of life. You have a fantastic concept. certainly you will be a future star poet. I wish you the best of luck
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rampy

Geetha Paniker
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Sometimes fate is cruel….fate and joy…you have depicted it so well…

Kavita Jain
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beautiful Saloni intense one fate is cruel is told by the same people who create a system that creates fate an education that create blind students people read the news or hear and then drop it quite mature one ,moving pathos

PRASENJIT CHOWDHURY
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Society is made of many bad sayings of putting some true fellows down. It’s sad to say but it’s not a fate it’s all created by those people who say it’s fate. Great piece and very good expressible words. Great one. 🙂

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