Oh Sweetheart!

Oh! sweetheart
I heard that you are dating someone
Even though you said that I am the only one
I heard that you both are spending lots of time together
But, for me you had time NEVER
Is she your roommate ?
Remember? You ever called me your soul mate
You love her ?
That’s okay. I know, after sometime you will regret her.
Maybe, she is good in everything
I am also good in spoiling NOTHING
Her presence makes you complete
I wish you knew that your absence makes me incomplete
Not to write anything further
I wish you both a bright future
CONGRATULATIONS! to you both from the core of my heart
Wait! Sorry. That isn’t possible because its a broken heart .

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ammu sachariah
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well written Anila. I enjoyed it.

V.MUTHU MANICKAM
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Emotions expressed well. Thank you

Nadeem Qazilbash
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So much pain in these words, If he left. He never was, because the one who ‘is’ never leaves.

Savi Mani
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wonderful poem from a heart full of love for her love……love gives immense happiness yet love can be so painful that the scar gets itched on heart forever………yet as @nadeemq said, he was not the one because he would never have left then………wonderful poem from a young heart…….there is always life beyond the stars dear……

Lakhan Mal
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“CONGRATULATIONS! to you both from the core of my heart
Wait! Sorry. That isn’t possible because its a broken heart .”

The best lines in the poem. You really cannot wish them from the core of you heart as it is broken.

asoke kumar mitra
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wonderful write………..enjoyed

Shivam Garg
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beautiful poem!
Its the human nature, not to appreciate the one’s who care for us.

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