The Unbearable Loss

She was lifeless without him,
She felt incomplete without him,
She became a poor girl without him,
She was always bemoaning without him.

She waited eagerly for his reply,
But he was a senseless guy.
Day and night seemed like many years,
But his apathy ignored her river of tears.

Her past reminiscences were painful to hear,
His unbearable loss became her constant fear.
In the past, they had developed a strong bonding,
But never expected a future to be so astounding.

The tender girl could feel even his presence,
But her room appeared like a hell in his absence.
All she wanted was a little love and care,
The unfortunate doors were one place for her to stare.

Her appetite was spoilt while her throat dried,
Food and water were poison, the girl cried.
Restlessness was really reflected by her face,
Her only desire was his heart with a little empty space.

Smile and happiness were not a part of her gloomy world,
Only winds of anguish, cry and hopelessness swirled.
She wanted her life to end but she fought,
She erased her past and gave future a new shot.

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Nadeem Qazilbash

The loss so deeply felt in the words, yet one has to go, at some point, life just has to breath, the universe does not give you permission to stop.



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