My Woman Against Other Woman

My Woman Against Other Woman short poem

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Girl Friend is fantasy;
Wife is reality

Girl Friend is thunder;
Wife is tender

Girl Friend is Demanding;
Wife is Commanding

Girl Friend picks your pocket
Wife stitches your pocket

Girl Friend makes you wait
you make wife wait

When you are sick
Girl Friend says take care
While wife takes care

When you have shortage of money
Girl Friend says bye bye honey
Wife says ‘you take my money’

When you are in argument
Girl Friend says you shut up
Wife says let us patch up

Girl Friend breaks the house
Wife makes the house

When you are in trouble
Girl friend will leave you
Wife will live with you

You kiss the Girl friend in tension
With Wife you do so in full attention

If you deceive ;
Girl friend will forget you
Wife will forgive you

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I am a retired Engineer from the Government of Karnataka and now 64 year old. post retirement I fancied to write in 3 languages namely English,Hindi and kannada. I have written several poems,short stories etc and have published two books namely ""Tri bhasha Kritigalu and Rampys vision on lifes mission and now it has become passion for me to continue writing. I have also developed several software computer programmes covering Technical,medical and general programmes
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Preeti
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A very hilarious comparison of wife and girlfriend! Wonderfully portrayed!

Savi Mani
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ha ha ha very wonderful and hillarious poem Wife Vs. Girl friend………very true and superb comparison……..moral of the story ……..if you have a wife…….never venture out to a girl friend……..cause a wife will always forgive you as you said……liked the poem…….had a good laugh too……..something different from you this time………

asoke kumar mitra
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very true write………GF v/s wife………..only difference the degree of excitement…….

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