Inside Out

Inside Out short poem

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On a cloudy day
The grass plants were dancing with the air,
laying on the green carpet of grass
while travelling within me
Pain wave origin from heart
Like a deadly storm in a desert
The crushing waves of pain travel to all parts of body
Like the flying sand particles in a desert
From silent mind to withered soul
The heat of pain storm causes ice in eye to melt
Drops of water fell into tears
Which from the corner of the eye
Continue travelling on the cheek
Like pearls on a white leathered stone
The vision of eye gets blurred
The pain drops slipped and fell on grass
And the burden of the pain drop
Disturbed the dance of grass plant
It fell of on the ground
Absorbed in the root of grass plant
Suddenly sad rays of the dance
Saddend the air too
And now it was a pain storm
Travelling all around…
“It changes one’s vision to see the world”
You see it all around what you feel inside

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i just write simple lines to free myself from the burden of random words which comes in my mind of and on.Poetry is beautiful way to express feelings and emotions which on the other hand are difficult to express.Everyone takes POETIC lines in their own meaning and feel the depth and UNDERSTAND it by their own experiences in journey of life.Poetry can touch both depth and peak of sadness,happiness,and all other relative emotions.feelings are the most prestige element of human life.They have warm expression when one is happy and FROZEN STONE LIKE EXPRESSION when one in in the sea of pain.Writing keepS one alive after every death As human die hundreds of time before the ultimate physical death... i consider those people very lucky who had eyes to see and sense to feel the things around...and who have felt the depth of life,s reality and have touched "gham ki intha"....as we can see in poetry of JAUN ELIA...:)
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Preeti
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So perfectly nailed! What’s inside is what appears! Amazing!

Krish Chatakondu
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This is purely magic…… simplicity in command ……as if everything is happening right in front of my eyes…. so gentle even the worst pain ….visuals that’s how they are made to look like….. every grain so natural completely and organic…..

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