Deficient raptor

Deficient raptor short poem

She watches him,
every move
sucks in his atmosphere,
she fakes petty unconcern
listless, restless
encircling the prey
spinning her web..

He sees all, walks away
still faking it,
she retreats
smudging the smug
hibernating
until the next one lands.

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Welcome to HoP @Pooja_Ugrani. Interesting debut, hope to read more from you.

Reyvrex Questor Reyes
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A predator has to use all ploys to get the prey. Just be sure which are you,

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