I am a retired Engineer from the Government of Karnataka and now 64 year old. post retirement I fancied to write in 3 languages namely English,Hindi and kannada. I have written several poems,short stories etc and have published two books namely ""Tri bhasha Kritigalu and Rampys vision on lifes mission and now it has become passion for me to continue writing. I have also developed several software computer programmes covering Technical,medical and general programmes
Nice poem, the love which was a mirage, which gave pain and nothing else should be forgotten for ever and removed from the heart, thrown away to the dungeon of past, cause that love is never going to come back and it only gives pain when remembered……..a hard fact but true…….
and the love one has, standing by his side, being with him forever, caring for him, showering her love on him, being a true companion in his life should be reciprocated before it becomes too late……the hard fact of life your poem…….regards
I am an orphan, I think of my parents often, I hope that they are alive, But why they left me aside? They left me with a purpose, Or lost me in a ambush, All I want to know, Is
At 10:30, Silence Dispersed,every edge withdrew with dark, The moon was pale, still brightening as diamond spark, At the tree, an owl hoot, at surface dogs barked. Sudden, I heeded, the sound of footsteps was appearing from the street, exulted
Love is It is not just doing what crosses your mind without thinking about it or doing things just to look good It is much more bringing a genuine smile in the face of a child or truly promising that
Dear love, I have always wanted to understand you more, But first of all, you must know you are the one who I most adore. Dear love, will you stand by me through the most rugged journeys of all? Dear
Far away from the world of love, hatred and war There is yet another world breathing silently Thats the world of love we call. There holds no boundaries No caste or creed Its purely emotions swirling freely. No land is
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4 Comments on "The Snubbed Vs The True Love"
While the love that is gone, one holds close to the heart, the real love waits by her side, hoping to be reciprocated and appreciated.
Very true. we live life as mirage and forget the reality. thanks for bringing out the gist of the poem
Nice poem, the love which was a mirage, which gave pain and nothing else should be forgotten for ever and removed from the heart, thrown away to the dungeon of past, cause that love is never going to come back and it only gives pain when remembered……..a hard fact but true…….
and the love one has, standing by his side, being with him forever, caring for him, showering her love on him, being a true companion in his life should be reciprocated before it becomes too late……the hard fact of life your poem…….regards
beautifully summarised what the Love is all about. thanks Savi ji for a wonderful analysis of my poem