I Saw You

I Saw You short poem

‘I saw you standing beside the tree
Surrounded by lush of greenery
A beauty, that everyone would be
Jealous ,to this pleasure, that I see
As gentle winds whispers tenderly
At nearby hills and through the valley
The meadow glows as on hearts befell
This stellar night that spreads magic spell
As my joyous heart sings to the moon
Serenading with a soothing tune
With flowers, dreams and tender songs
And butterflies dancing all along
Filled with praise and astounding passion
This flourish display of perfection
Standing like a sweet flawless portrait
That transformed me to be a poet! ‘

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Mr. Jesus Diaz Llorico hails from the beautiful province of Iloilo, Philippines. He was a former member of the Police Force in his hometown for a couple years and later on joined the Bureau of Fire Protection wherein he was assigned in several parts of the Visayas. He then decided to go abroad and work for 22 years in the Kingdom of Saudi Arabia and is now connected with the Prince Sultan Airbase in Al kharj. He is a regular contributor of the PANAY NEWS, a daily newspaper in the Visayas and the KABAYAN WEEKLY, one of the leading weekly newspaper in the United Arab Emirates. Working abroad, away from his native land and loved ones, it is in writing poetry that Jesus finds comfort in times of solitude in a foreign land.
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@Jesus Diaz Llorico Please use appropriate punctuation or else the verse loses its meaning altogether. nice piece of writing though.

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