The Lord’s Suicide

Sublime spirits trapped in a bottle
The fallen son rises to do battle
A hero of the lord risen from sin
The walls of resolve grow ever thin

Break the bond, release the spirit
The will prays, but the heart’s lit
The flames consume every inch
But still he asks for another pinch

Another sin, visions of immortality
A corrupted hero sees only eternity
The lord can blow his brains in this land
A whisky bottle will raise him from the sand.

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Nadeem Qazilbash
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Risen from sin, commits sinful suicide, to rise again as sin personified.
This Lord is no savior.

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