Remember Me, Do You?

Remember Me, Do You? short poem

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Remember me, do you ?
I was your shadow, a positive one
Always by your side, concerned
Giving energy to your soul
while my soul was draining somewhere

You told me you love me
And I believed you blind
I surrendered myself
Not caring time for self
I thought of you always
Everything for you,
My time, my life and my love

In contrary
You were real clever
Trying love wiles on me
And you only came for your need

I understood you one day
The bloody brave brash
I ain’t a doll anymore
I have the furious blood
Stored within, which one day
I will spit on you

I will walk away, a bit longer
Turn back, look at you and query
Remember me, do you?
Before you are about to apologize
I will say
I was love of your life
Your only love of life

And I walk away to own life
With my own shadow, that’s
Bigger and prouder than me in all sense..

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Geetha Paniker


Savi Mani

wow excellent superb fantastic, felt each and every bit………it takes a lot of courage to walk away from all those painful relations but yes you did and that too you have your own individual persona and head held high, not as a shadow of someone else but your own shadow following you, and yes definitely and of course you have to be proud of yourself……..a poem which reflects from “i cannot “……….to ……”i can” ………..congrats

Viswas Menon

@laya_sarath The typical Laya style ……strong…heavy and emotive….

well in the final analysis everyone has to chose their own paths ….in life …

asoke kumar mitra

ahhhh, very good write. pain anger………………..very sad and bold write.

ammu sachariah

A person must be like you. I congratule you.Beautiful poem.

ammu sachariah

I congratulate you.

ramakrishnan chatakondu

I touched and saw ……there was no blood on my skin…..but I could feel every minute the internal bleeding….
…….such is the power of a back- stab……

……..friend just move on ……life is beautiful ……if we can erase some swines from our memories…..
…….I wish you should restart afresh…….you are an angel and god will be with you…..once again fall in love with love .

Kadam Terangpi

Very beautifully written loved it


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