You

You short poem

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You came into my life like a gentle breeze,
and made me feel at ease.
you comforted me by sharing my happiness and my griefs.
You came when I was alone,
you changed me to a flower from a stone.
You made me cry and made me laugh,
you taught me how to be soft yet tough.
You gave me strength and courage…
to face life as it comes at every stage.
You washed my thoughts like a river,
and taught me to be humble yet clever.
You enlightened me like the sun,
to love and respect everyone.
You stood firm like a mountain…
taught me how to face problems to win.
You did everything for me,
you were there when I was in need…
You were, and are the only one whom I always thank (seek)!

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Writing is a passion that I will never allow to fade inside me. It all started as a small note in my school diary and I wrote my first poem when I was in class 8th. I write poems and have even contested in many poetry websites and magazines during school as well as college days.I got the novel idea of publishing my poems and started posting my poems on social platforms, since then I have been receiving excellent and positive feedback. I am basically from Bangalore and being a literature lover, I maintain a poetry blog called https://www.facebook.com/PoeticTranscendence, please do visit this website which has the collection of my poems. Happy Writing!!
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Nikita Mehendiratta
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Nice words. 🙂 Nice poem

Saurin Desai
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I have mentors for whom I have similar feelings 🙂

ammu sachariah
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beautiful poem.

asoke kumar mitra
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lovely write, wonderful thoughts on love. this can be a song eternal…………

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