Lively Raindrops

Lively Raindrops short poem

Photo by: Arun M Sivakrishna

Rain holds life,
In every little drop,
Hanging on every leaf and flower,
Reflecting without a mask.

Each lone drop,
Has a story to tell,
Of a struggle to hang on,
In its journey.

Like a teardrop,
It falls from a billowing cloud,
Still shines like a diamond,
Charming the heart.

Little drops hang tight,
On every flower,
Till a thirsty butterfly,
Comes along for a sip.

The hanging drops
Fall making a puddle,
And sink down,
Into a depth of the unknown.

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Saurin Desai
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you create such vivid visuals in my mind with each of your stanzas… very nice

Savi Mani
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nice short poem, felt like the rain drops representing each breath, each moment we live in life, taking origin from nowhere and then merging to the unknown……..lovely poem……..

Viswas Menon
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@geetha_paniker…..well expressed…..a lovely pictorial ……

Laya Sarath
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Wonderful geemme…rain is something I miss in this land 🙂 But then I could even got the invigoration smell of the mud after the first shot of rain :-)..that pure and strong your lines are …

ramakrishnan chatakondu
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After enjoying a poem……..
As a token of appreciation we should leave something…………
…………..I am leaving my heart .

asoke kumar mitra
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I love rain……….so I loved your write………beautifully presented with a new style of placing words……..poignant write

Neetu M.
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The raindrops beautifully trickle through your poem!

ruthieg33
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I loved your poem. Nicely written.

ammu sachariah
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I loved your poem. It includes everything.

Arpita Roy
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lovely poem with a beautiful representation of rain holding life. 🙂

kwai chee low
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Lovely poem; it makes one pause and ponder over the beauty of the raindrop and thus enjoy the moment. Raindrops are at once poetic and touch on romance; it is not surprising that there is at least one popular song written on raindrops.

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