nice short poem, felt like the rain drops representing each breath, each moment we live in life, taking origin from nowhere and then merging to the unknown……..lovely poem……..
Wonderful geemme…rain is something I miss in this land 🙂 But then I could even got the invigoration smell of the mud after the first shot of rain :-)..that pure and strong your lines are …
Lovely poem; it makes one pause and ponder over the beauty of the raindrop and thus enjoy the moment. Raindrops are at once poetic and touch on romance; it is not surprising that there is at least one popular song written on raindrops.
Beside the river stood a Gulmohar tree, With buds and flowers bloomed thee, Beautiful flowers of colour red, Filled my mind in morning bed. My open window viewed as many, All the creatures without weary. Lovely were the flowers That
As I watch the raindrops pelting down my Window panes, my thoughts wander away, hover. I think of the unique creation weaved By God through His magical fingers that Wash my despondence, gloom, sappiness and Make my spirits soar high
Every lesson, whether drama or art There’s always laughter from us that will part Something funny must have been passed around We’ll try to stay quiet, but still make sound The teacher stops, to either smile or frown They look
I sat by the window, With a cup of tea warming my palms, And watched the plummeting raindrops, Gleefully break into a sprightly dance. One by one the drops, Glided down the window pane, And with great rhythm and motion,
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22 Comments on "Lively Raindrops"
you create such vivid visuals in my mind with each of your stanzas… very nice
Thank you for those inspiring words. @saurin_desai
nice short poem, felt like the rain drops representing each breath, each moment we live in life, taking origin from nowhere and then merging to the unknown……..lovely poem……..
Thank you for those inspiring words. Yes raindrops are a breath of life for me. @savi_mani
@geetha_paniker…..well expressed…..a lovely pictorial ……
Thank you for those inspiring words Viswas. @vistar
Wonderful geemme…rain is something I miss in this land 🙂 But then I could even got the invigoration smell of the mud after the first shot of rain :-)..that pure and strong your lines are …
Thank you Laya for the read.
After enjoying a poem……..
As a token of appreciation we should leave something…………
…………..I am leaving my heart .
Thank you Sir for the inspiring words.
I love rain……….so I loved your write………beautifully presented with a new style of placing words……..poignant write
Thank you for the inspiring words Sir. @asokekumar
The raindrops beautifully trickle through your poem!
Thank you for those words of inspiration. @hummingpoet
I loved your poem. Nicely written.
Thank you @ruthieg33
I loved your poem. It includes everything.
Thank you Ammu Sachariah. @ammukutty_sachariah
lovely poem with a beautiful representation of rain holding life. 🙂
Thank you Arpita. @arpita_roy
Lovely poem; it makes one pause and ponder over the beauty of the raindrop and thus enjoy the moment. Raindrops are at once poetic and touch on romance; it is not surprising that there is at least one popular song written on raindrops.
Thank you Kwai Chee Low@kwaicheelow