As I Gave Into You

As I Gave Into You short poem

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The drying flowers sat in the vase
as you strolled through my thoughts.
Where were you?
I was here with my coffee,
Breakfast became slow
time sat across the table
You were stealing
this passing moment
as I gave into thinking of you.

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Edo Castro

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I'm a bassist and composer for close to 40 years. I began writing poetry about as long as I've been playing Bass. Most of my writing up to the last 10 years was schlock. I think I've managed to cull the vapid, and perhaps nurture something more mature in my writing. Sometimes my poems are love driven, other times they're just thoughts spurred on by the moment. Whatever the case, I hope that what I conjure up is emotive, provocative and at best entertaining.
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