My Loving Partner

When I bid Farewell
My eyes were not wet,
My cheeks were not red,
And my lips were not trembled-
But my heart was broken.
I was shattered like anything.
You are going away for ever.
We will never meet again on this earth.
When your body was kept
In the deep pit of the grave yard,
I knew, I am no more.
Years and years we lived together.
We quarreled , we fought for silly matters-
But we loved each other.
We forget all the fights within no time.
It was you-
Always took the first step to compromise
I knew, I was every thing for you.
But, I was so proud to understand you
My ego didn’t allow me to be under your arms.
You made me laugh-
You made me cry-
You made me happy-
And some times a Devil too.
I do not know how you feel now.
Oh, I forgot- you are no more in this filthy world.
For others you are dead.
But for me you are alive-
In my heart,
In my soul,
And in my body.
You are my lovely partner,
You can never go away from me.

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I was working as the head teacher of a high school for many years.I have written many poems in English, Urdu and Malayalam. But i never had the confidence to bring it to the public .Better to say, i never tried for it due to lack of confidence.Now i got a platform to bring myself forward.Thanks to the editorial board of high on poems.I enjoy reading and writing.
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Sheena Mathew
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Departure is very painful but u have worded it so well.

Geetha Paniker
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A touching one, painful about the ultimate truth of life.

ramakrishnan chatakondu
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It requires a big heart to confess certain things in public………
………and the poem only an excuse …………
…….to make light certain burdens…..
…….no doubt this is definitely a quality poem addressed to a soul which is very very close to somebody’s heart .

Savi Mani
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Dear Ammu, death is inevitable it sooner or later takes our loved ones away from us, but what remains back are the wonderful memories, some memories may be painful yet some memories must be making you smile even now when you remember those special moments, parting is painful but those days you shared with your loved one, are the biggest treasure you hold close to your heart………….yes he lives eternally in your heart embedded in your soul, touch your heart and you can almost feel him, cause thats his dwelling as long as you sustin life…….lovely poem….loved reading it

Lakhan Mal
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Love is eternal. It has immense power in it. Awesome lines:)

Viswas Menon
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@ammukutty_sachariah…..death is a great teacher….of many lessons in life….but most of the time rather late….we miss many things about a person only when he or she is no more….you have so wonderfully brought this aspect out in your poem.

one must always believe in Life….and enjoy life since we have ONLY one life….it should not be wasted in petty ego and fights ….just love life and live and enjoy life….

thanks for sharing

Nikita Mehendiratta
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It was painful to read it, But also made me understand the value of people we are living with.
Ammu Mam your writings have deep meaning. Always a new texture in it.

#Live with devotion and let live : a message i could gather after reading. 🙂

PRASENJIT CHOWDHURY
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Death is the departure of the body to another world but the soul remains. People are immortal and they live in our heart. Painful to read and it’s more painful to write as when you sit to write all the memories flow fresh and tears roll down without notice. I can try to feel your the pain ma’am but cannot feel it truly. Ma’am you conveyed the feelings with dept in it that makes my heart heavy and eyes watery. Ma’am sir isn’t away from you as love binds everyone even after death. Both of your love is eternal.

Randall Smith
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I was starting to feel so bad reading this. It began dark and sad. And then I realized you were talking to a love that would never die for you. I may have misunderstood some of the meaning but I believe you were sharing a good feeling with a lover. I was very moved by the whole poem.

Randall Smith
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I was starting to feel so bad reading this. It began dark and sad. And then I realized you were talking to a love that would never die for you. I may have misunderstood some of the meaning but I believe you were sharing a good feeling with a lover. I was very moved by the whole poem.

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