In Vain, A Minute After

In Vain, A Minute After short poem

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There was a matter to write about,
A minute ago, mass of words were
Filling up my mind
I should pen this, that and other
My head was overflowing with
Powerful words and emotions
To an extent, that I lost balance…
And I went into darkness and
Blankness covered me up
I was floating like a paper ship
Which ripples, moved ahead
I lay thinking, what I thought a minute past
Where were my escorts of alphabets?
And emotions…
Alas, all in vacuum

And thus happens, If I do not jot
Things, then and there…..

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Geetha Paniker
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That is a good one. Jot down then and there. 🙂

Viswas Menon
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@Laya_Sarath……wonderful poetic amnesia…happens to most poets…
….on a lighter vain….thank God you recalled to pen the words in this piece…;-)

ramakrishnan chatakondu
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If you have a passion for writing poetries……I have got with me e a passion for giving compliments………by the way I want to give you one now ……..but where are my escotrs of alphabets ?

Reyvrex Questor Reyes
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It’s okay to forget. In my case, I sometimes dream whole poems, but hard to retain all, whole paragraphs, minutes after waking up. If I run after it by sleeping again, no more. Your poem is a factual experience. Nice reading.

asoke kumar mitra
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I always keep a small dairy with me and a pen, when it comes, I place it in writing………and later I try to give the shape. no question of forgetting…………….

asoke kumar mitra
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beautiful write, the style, the use of imagery and the subject are very nice.

Preeti
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Happens with almost everyone, sometimes in their lives:)

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