When Will You Say…

When Will You Say... short poem

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Standing by my window,
I subconsciously watch the sky,
for hours.
Thinking about you,
I fantasize more and more,
with no cowers.

I recollect,
almost all the talks shared,
till now.
Your smiling face,
your sweet voice always in my mind,
are just wow.

I wonder every time,
that do you also feel the same thing,
the same way.
If it is so,
I just want to ask you that,
when will you say !

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Balveen Cheema
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Vartika, some queries remain unanswered, and the wait continues!

asoke kumar mitra
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eternal question,,,,,,,, to a loved one………. wonderful write

Laya Sarath
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Keep waiting 🙂

ammu sachariah
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Good poem.

Akhtar Jawad
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I was so much moved with this beautiful poem, when I started writing a comment, I don’t know how it took shape of a poem.
She is silent,
He is silent,
But the silence is broken,
But the eyes that speak,
A beautiful heart in love,
Is reflected in the eyes.

She knows it well,
He knows it well,
Then why this refrain?
The silent lips are still speaking,
The beautiful feeling of love,
Is reflected in smiles.

She cries for him,
He cries for her,
The eyes are wet,
But the cheeks are dry?
Hot tears have changed the state,
And appear in the sighs.

She is waiting for a day,
He is waiting for a day,
When inflated balloon,
Bursts with a sound,
That slaps the hearts,
You are too bad, but I love you.

ammu sachariah
Member

Beautiful poem.

Savi Mani
Member

beautiful poem dear Vartika, yes when you look at the window and watch the sky, the person you miss most is the one whom you love with all your heart all your soul……..specially a distant one……..but nevertheless true love soon finds its own path and the two loving souls unite……….nice poem loved it……keep writing…………the best are those poem which come directly from the heart

Savi Mani
Member

Dear Vartika, trust me…..yes like water finds its own level, true love also finds its path…sooner or later!!!!

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