I was so much moved with this beautiful poem, when I started writing a comment, I don’t know how it took shape of a poem. She is silent, He is silent, But the silence is broken, But the eyes that speak, A beautiful heart in love, Is reflected in the eyes.
She knows it well, He knows it well, Then why this refrain? The silent lips are still speaking, The beautiful feeling of love, Is reflected in smiles.
She cries for him, He cries for her, The eyes are wet, But the cheeks are dry? Hot tears have changed the state, And appear in the sighs.
She is waiting for a day, He is waiting for a day, When inflated balloon, Bursts with a sound, That slaps the hearts, You are too bad, but I love you.
beautiful poem dear Vartika, yes when you look at the window and watch the sky, the person you miss most is the one whom you love with all your heart all your soul……..specially a distant one……..but nevertheless true love soon finds its own path and the two loving souls unite……….nice poem loved it……keep writing…………the best are those poem which come directly from the heart
I will always think of you Deriggs I always pray for you that you have health, love and happiness When I am home alone I think of you and call you to offer you my greetings Sometimes I even write
I remember when I was just 16, So much of my life was yet unseen. I was searching for something to help me discover, What set me apart, made me different from others. And there in my neighborhood, where we
I will always love you You are the one who gave me the chance and the encouragement to be who I am today And in spite my brief shortcomings they are only because I love you and care about you
Being a girl, what is it like? No! You can’t be out late, you can’t ride a bike Don’t party hard, keep the boys at bay You have all the freedom they say But why then are our choices already
In three forms Two thirds; Still, Not to drink a drop, or two pots for bath. One-third in Coco cola bottle, One-third is in the Cleavage water, Then, we are throwing stones at the well, Waiting for the crow bath;
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Vartika, some queries remain unanswered, and the wait continues!
eternal question,,,,,,,, to a loved one………. wonderful write
Thanks
Keep waiting 🙂
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Good poem.
I was so much moved with this beautiful poem, when I started writing a comment, I don’t know how it took shape of a poem.
She is silent,
He is silent,
But the silence is broken,
But the eyes that speak,
A beautiful heart in love,
Is reflected in the eyes.
She knows it well,
He knows it well,
Then why this refrain?
The silent lips are still speaking,
The beautiful feeling of love,
Is reflected in smiles.
She cries for him,
He cries for her,
The eyes are wet,
But the cheeks are dry?
Hot tears have changed the state,
And appear in the sighs.
She is waiting for a day,
He is waiting for a day,
When inflated balloon,
Bursts with a sound,
That slaps the hearts,
You are too bad, but I love you.
Thanks. And This poem is also very beautiful. @akhtar_jawad..
Thanks
Beautiful poem.
Thanks @ammukutty_sachariah
beautiful poem dear Vartika, yes when you look at the window and watch the sky, the person you miss most is the one whom you love with all your heart all your soul……..specially a distant one……..but nevertheless true love soon finds its own path and the two loving souls unite……….nice poem loved it……keep writing…………the best are those poem which come directly from the heart
Thanks @Savi_Mani I really hope ‘true love soon finds its own path’ 🙂
Dear Vartika, trust me…..yes like water finds its own level, true love also finds its path…sooner or later!!!!