I was so much moved with this beautiful poem, when I started writing a comment, I don’t know how it took shape of a poem. She is silent, He is silent, But the silence is broken, But the eyes that speak, A beautiful heart in love, Is reflected in the eyes.
She knows it well, He knows it well, Then why this refrain? The silent lips are still speaking, The beautiful feeling of love, Is reflected in smiles.
She cries for him, He cries for her, The eyes are wet, But the cheeks are dry? Hot tears have changed the state, And appear in the sighs.
She is waiting for a day, He is waiting for a day, When inflated balloon, Bursts with a sound, That slaps the hearts, You are too bad, but I love you.
beautiful poem dear Vartika, yes when you look at the window and watch the sky, the person you miss most is the one whom you love with all your heart all your soul……..specially a distant one……..but nevertheless true love soon finds its own path and the two loving souls unite……….nice poem loved it……keep writing…………the best are those poem which come directly from the heart
A story they have to tell One that can teach a lesson like a folktale With a lot being observed And knowing that no dish has been served They grab a pencil and paper Cause the pages are still eager
When the days get dark and there is no ease, I swear I’ll shine, won’t let it cease… If the going gets tough, and it drags me down, I’ll stand up again and straighten my crown… When it doesn’t seem
Into the darkness, into the night, Filled with despair, no reason to survive, I lay down with everything to lose, No hope no life and reason to grow,. A winter wind passing by, Touching my skin and shiverinv by., The
The bygone art, a dead shrine; Thou not dead, thou live… shall live By art of carve that plays on and will it play Forever, timeless, in century’s lap The beauty, thou struck me a year back: So calm, so
When you kiss me you Set my heart on fire! You send me into frenzy, A frenzy of sweet burning Desire! When You Kiss Me I am Like putty in your hands It’s nothing short of ecstasy Sheer ecstasy and
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Vartika, some queries remain unanswered, and the wait continues!
eternal question,,,,,,,, to a loved one………. wonderful write
Thanks
Keep waiting 🙂
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Good poem.
I was so much moved with this beautiful poem, when I started writing a comment, I don’t know how it took shape of a poem.
She is silent,
He is silent,
But the silence is broken,
But the eyes that speak,
A beautiful heart in love,
Is reflected in the eyes.
She knows it well,
He knows it well,
Then why this refrain?
The silent lips are still speaking,
The beautiful feeling of love,
Is reflected in smiles.
She cries for him,
He cries for her,
The eyes are wet,
But the cheeks are dry?
Hot tears have changed the state,
And appear in the sighs.
She is waiting for a day,
He is waiting for a day,
When inflated balloon,
Bursts with a sound,
That slaps the hearts,
You are too bad, but I love you.
Thanks. And This poem is also very beautiful. @akhtar_jawad..
Thanks
Beautiful poem.
Thanks @ammukutty_sachariah
beautiful poem dear Vartika, yes when you look at the window and watch the sky, the person you miss most is the one whom you love with all your heart all your soul……..specially a distant one……..but nevertheless true love soon finds its own path and the two loving souls unite……….nice poem loved it……keep writing…………the best are those poem which come directly from the heart
Thanks @Savi_Mani I really hope ‘true love soon finds its own path’ 🙂
Dear Vartika, trust me…..yes like water finds its own level, true love also finds its path…sooner or later!!!!