..and to that end she dips and waves for if the moon is set ablaze all love that is will be ablaze as She does see the depths in us love is blind Gone too, moon beam upon no wrath. (Mitra, this is what happened after I read moon… it inspires)
does go beyond the depths of corn and then the rushes wave to say, dear moon just don’t go away…
I am writing poems for last 45 years.in Bengali and in English. a lot of them is printed in various magazines and collections. i am writing English poems lately in the net started in the year 2011. This is the first time, a reader of my poetry wrote like this. I am speechless.my voice is choked. like fugitive moon don’t go away…….. so kind of you, for your comments. ” it inspires”…………. in my silence…..a whisper just don’t go away.
in Bengali minakshi means………….”eye of a fish”…………a very sacred deity in south…….. MIN means fish +akshi means eye…………. never to forget.
Nice poem specially these lines “a spider’s torn web, dangling moon was lost and gone forgetting her longing for love, dream and desire” Keep writing 🙂
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16 Comments on "Moon"
Ohh lost love..and sleepless nights 🙂 Wonderful sir..
nice poem, the heart yearns for more and there is no end ….there can never be……
..and to that end she dips and waves
for if the moon is set ablaze
all love that is will be ablaze
as
She does see the depths in us
love is blind
Gone too,
moon beam upon no wrath. (Mitra, this is what happened after I read moon… it inspires)
does go beyond the depths of corn
and then the rushes wave to say, dear moon just don’t go away…
I am writing poems for last 45 years.in Bengali and in English. a lot of them is printed in various magazines and collections. i am writing English poems lately in the net started in the year 2011.
This is the first time, a reader of my poetry wrote like this.
I am speechless.my voice is choked. like fugitive moon don’t go away……..
so kind of you, for your comments. ” it inspires”………….
in my silence…..a whisper just don’t go away.
in Bengali minakshi means………….”eye of a fish”…………a very sacred deity in south…….. MIN means fish +akshi means eye…………. never to forget.
Beautifully written….wonderful to hear you are sharing your work! I look forward to reading many more. Cheers,
Natalie
thank you for your read and comment
This search for true love alogwith sleepless nights will never come to an end.
This search for true love along with sleepless nights will never come to an end. I whole – heartedly believe in it. Extremely well expressed!
thank you for your comments…………
Nice poem specially these lines
“a spider’s torn web, dangling moon was lost and gone
forgetting her
longing for love, dream and desire”
Keep writing 🙂
thank you ……..for your read.
Sleepless nights to watch the moon in its beauty and splendor….awesome!
thank you for your read.
Such beauty hidden in those simple words, I simply loved it:)
thank you again vandana…………for your repeat read………my pleasure
Romantic.