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I stopped to gaze
One mistake already made
Moody wind, pale snowflakes
Quite with mysteries
Dark and Delphic secrets
My legs froze, my body still
The ropes of the mesmerizing beauty tangled me
No struggle, no pain
A moment of eternal bliss
Life gave me puzzles
And mistakes are what I made,
To stop, to trust
The snow was covered on the naked land
Like a blanket of white peace
Hand in hand, I and the bewitching weather walked
I looked down its fuzzy and cloudy eyes
Regarded it as truthful friend
So manipulating yet so alluring
Through the gloomy forest and mean density
The weather and I walked hand in hand
To trust was a mistake
To love was another
Life had set out traps
and was chased to them
The unexpected cobbled stones, the crocked path
The darkness turned in
My dearest friend slipped out
Droplets of heavenly rain seemed coming from hell
The weather blossomed in misery and despair
Down on my knees I fell
And deep down my trust fell
Life gave me mistakes
Correction is what I didn’t do
But the greatest mistake I did
Was to then cease and cave in
Life gave me lessons
But I didn’t master in learning
But now where I stand
I see myself as a paint splash
So longing to clean it up
Alas! I just can’t.
Life gave me lessons
And mistakes are what I made
and mistakes are what I made .
Poems about Learning Masterful interpretation on Lesson Reflective musings about Mistake
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17 Comments on "Mistakes"
YOU GO GURL!!!!!!!!….I mean YOU rock….. proud to be your bestie
thanx nakshatra !! love you!! xo.
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Oh wow, I could not stop reading this. Just wow. I loved it!
thank you so very much !! 🙂
You are a born poetess………neighbours’ envy .….owner’s pride….
thankyou !!
beautiful!! 🙂
thankyou !! 🙂
Beautiful. I love it,
thankyou !! 🙂
Your level of maturity surpasses that of your age and puts me to shame. Kudos to you on a good write and keep writing! 🙂
thankyou 🙂
Yaar mistakes toh hamesha kardi rehti ho tum toh faida kya poem likhna ka
sweet sweet sweet….. looking forward to read more of your poems
thankyou 🙂
ohmy goood i made a mistake !!!!
i read ur wonderful poem just nowwww
glad 2 be ur bestie
Good work.
Very genuine and pious and true. Very well done.