Had never believed till this date There could be real soulmates Your love which gives me so much pleasure A true love which is my life’s biggest treasure Yet the distance gives so much pain I wonder if it’s my life’s biggest failure Or my life’s biggest gain I trust, I believe when you say The distance is not keeping our love apart You said listen carefully And I can hear beating of your heart with my heart Holding hands, walking on the sea shore Watching the sunset together Lying under the stars talking for hours and hours It’s sad but I know we will never be able to do all these together Oh my distant love, no distance can ever Keep my heart from loving you Because I have finally found a true soulmate in you
@savi_mani ma’am this is again a beautifully written poem expressing the longing to meet between distant lovers.. Bt yet being connected through this threat of love.. Which only makes the distance a mere word.. As their hearts are always connected.. 🙂 this is so relatable :’)
thank you dear Celestina for liking the poem……yes the longing to be with the distant lover always keep the love going and growing…….they may be physically separated but the loving heart keeps them united……..thats why i had always said poetry is from one loving heart to another………thank you for feeling it……….
Well you’re one hopeless romantic Almost a border line lovesick fanatic But I wouldn’t change you not if I could I love your wet and sappy kisses And the way you hold me so tight I think I’m gonna pass
Through the narrow curves, of street, my mind, walked along the evening breeze; I reached Over the banks of a near-by lake, where I Used to sit in my college-days; with sweet Memories of girls, I loved, I remembered, Sitting
You and me, both have names But love has one that does have fame From time immemorial when life’s dream yet to born From a conch’s world that blew a song: A song of heaven, a smile of joy Where
My love is like a sparkling star That’s newly born in every moment O my love is like a melody That’s sweetly played in flute So sweet and pure love is yours That’s why so deep in love I’m I
(1). At that morning, I wrote on the blackboard with white chalk: when negative collides with positive, it becomes cloudy; When two negatives meet, it clears up; When two positives meet, it lightens until they fight on top of a
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8 Comments on "On Distant Love"
wonderful …so expressive …so emotive ….
Thank you Viswas
This poem neither reached my heart……nor my brain…
………it sweetly melted on my lip .
Oh dear @ramakrishnan_chatakondu what can i say, thank you so much……. your comments brought smile on my lips….thats what i can say…….regards
nice:)
thanx Preeti……
@savi_mani ma’am this is again a beautifully written poem expressing the longing to meet between distant lovers.. Bt yet being connected through this threat of love.. Which only makes the distance a mere word.. As their hearts are always connected.. 🙂 this is so relatable :’)
thank you dear Celestina for liking the poem……yes the longing to be with the distant lover always keep the love going and growing…….they may be physically separated but the loving heart keeps them united……..thats why i had always said poetry is from one loving heart to another………thank you for feeling it……….