Sweet Whisperings

Sweet Whisperings short poem prose poem

Surrendering to-

Which they have no control over,

Each day they are together-

Every time they look at one another,

They give each other a part of themselves.

Whispering promises of tomorrow-

Her dreams, his wings-

In the embrace they find love,

So divine, so perfect.

Pieces of puzzle, fitting perfectly-

Embracing the imperfections,

Rising above the I’s and Me’s

In the journey of life they walk together

Nurturing his ambitions, she follows her own.

Giving each other all the love they have-

Sweet whisperings, more than just the bed-time stories.

(Acrostic: An acrostic is a poem or other form of writing in which the first letter, syllable or word of each line, paragraph or other recurring feature in the text spells out a word or a message.)

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Arti Honrao

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Author of fiction books titled 'My Life story' and 'Is This Love & Autumn - The Last Leaf' and novel 'Resemblance - The Journey of a Doppelganger' I enjoy writing short stories on Relationships. I have attempted writing form poems like Haiku, Tanka, Cinquain, Acrostics etc but I most enjoy writing Prose poems where I get to express myself without the limitations of number of words or rhyming. Most of my writings depict human feelings and emotions, which I try to bring out onto the page and into the minds of the reader. I believe that essence of writing lies in not only entertaining the reader, but speaking to them through words. My style of writing makes it easier for the readers to visualize the story unfolding around them. I am of the opinion that being good at writing a story is not about the story being unpredictable, it is about the way you narrate the predictable story and still keep the reader interested.I blog at Straight From The Heart (http://www.artihonrao.net). I am an administrator and web-designer at Writer's Ezine (http://www.writersezine.com).My Profile page: http://www.artihonrao.in
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A poem which feels like walking on soft downy grass, a tempo so sweet and reassuring..beautifully written @Arti_Honrao !

J.rid
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So many times I have attempted the acrostic and it comes over forced.
This one of yours flows with ease and peace I loved it. It felt like walking
peacefully in bare foot in a babbling brook with the sun shining.
Sorry that was truly my internal picture after reading.
I go and dry my feet now. x

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