The Wall

The Wall short poem

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I thought I would fall,
but there was an invisible wall…
remember that scary doll,
then I could hardly crawl…

I thought I would fall,
but there was an invisible wall…
Everything was strange and new,
mom I was looking for you…

I thought I would fall,
but there was an invisible wall…
It was a race to the top,
but I tried not to stop…

I thought I would fall,
but there was an invisible wall…
He was tall and fair,
how could I not stop and stare…

I still feel myself fall,
I hope there is an invisible wall….

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Swathi Rao
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Intriguing.. Nice lines..

Shamala Chandran
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Hope the invisible wall is always around for you!

Ramapriya Nr
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madam,
Beautifully scripted poem. very innovative. keep up the good work

Viswas Menon
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Wonderful conceptualization….well scripted ….stimulating….keep it up!!!

asoke kumar mitra
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very good write. invisible…..the imagery well crafted……..

Sanjiv
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The content and form both are innovative. I like it.

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