Coma

Coma short poem

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« I shall remember while the light lasts
And in the darkness I shall not forget »
[“Non-Catholic” Cemetery, Rome: headstone 2515]

Unable to
Enlighten the twilight between consciousness
And unconsciousness
She leaves aside the despair
Of those attending -Just like
Her own.

What can only be discerned from outside
Is an imperceptible blink of an eye
That occasionally displays and then disappears,
While those who remain wonder
If a flicker of consciousness still exists.

Just waiting for
The rustling of the leaves to
Drive out the innermost thoughts
And set free the imprisoned mind,

Like a butterfly wrapped in the
Flickering shadows of dusk
Yearns for light to take off,
She confides in absolute darkness
To eventually join
The community of the dead.

Leaving perhaps a promise behind,
That once accepted
Into the dark, she will not forget.

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Born in Tuscany, Italy. Currently living close to Florence and to Vinci, Leonardo's hometown. Doctor in Medicine, specialized in Neurosurgery, with an ancient passion for Poetry. Author of more than 1300 poems, in 13 collections. Among them: «A Chisciotte» [«To Quijote»], soon to be published as ebook.E-books published: . - «THE CHINESE GARDENS - English Poems» - English Edition [+ Italian Edition: «I Giardini Cinesi»]; . - «KARUMI - Haiku & Tanka»; . - «Allo Specchio di Me Stesso» ['At The Mirror of Myself'], (Italian Edition); . - «Il Vento e il Fiume» ['The Wind & The River'], (Italian Edition); . - " At The Crossing Of Seven Winds" (Anthology of Poetry - by 7 Authors: Fabrizio Frosini, Daniel J. Brick, Galina Italyanskaya, Diane Hine, Mallika Menon, Leah Ayliffe, Abby Sze); . - " Nine Tales Of Creation" (Anthology of Poetry - by 9 Authors: Fabrizio Frosini, Daniel J.Brick, Dilantha Gunawardana, Lawrence Beck, Maia Padua, Mihaela Pirjol, Niken Kusuma Wardani, Simone Inez Harriman, S.zaynub Kamoonpuri); . - " Scattering Dreams & Tales" (Anthology of Poetry - by 13 Authors: Fabrizio Frosini, Daniel J. Brick, Leah Ayliffe, Lawrence Beck, Dilantha Gunawardana, Simone Inez Harriman, Diane Hine, Galina Italyanskaya, Mallika Menon, Maia Padua, Mihaela Pirjol, Abby Sze, Niken Kusuma Wardani); . - " We Are The Words - Siamo Parole" (Anthology of Poetry - BILINGUAL: ENGLISH-ITALIAN- poems by 13 Authors: Fabrizio Frosini, Daniel J. Brick, Leah Ayliffe, Lawrence Beck, Dilantha Gunawardana, Simone Inez Harriman, Diane Hine, Galina Italyanskaya, Mallika Menon, Maia Padua, Mihaela Pirjol, Abby Sze, Niken Kusuma Wardani - translated by F.Frosini); . - " Whispers to the World - Sussurri al Mondo" (Anthology of Poetry - BILINGUAL: ENGLISH-ITALIAN- poems by 10 Authors: Fabrizio Frosini, Daniel J. Brick, Yewande Adedokun, Afrooz Jafarinoor, Birgitta Abimbola Heikka, Eunice Masumbuko, Asoke Kumar Mitra, Istvan Molnar, Nel Omofolarin, Gina Teel - translated by F.Frosini); . Some of my poems are also published in the Anthology " Riflessi 62" (Italian Edition) , edited by Pagine Srl.. ---> for the books published at Smashwords, go to: www.smashwords.com/profile/view/dottfrosini---> for the books published at AMAZON, go to: http://www.amazon.com/Fabrizio-Frosini/e/B014HA8ZUA. My own poetry collections [from the latest to the first one]: - 13. raccolta «The Chinese gardens - English Poems» - 12. raccolta «Allo Specchio di me stesso» - 11. raccolta «Nella luce confusa del crepuscolo» - 10. raccolta «Karumi - Haiku & Tanka» - 09. raccolta «A Chisciotte» [«To Quijote»] e altre poesie - 08. poema. «La Città dei Vivi e dei Morti» [epic poem of 1250 verses] - 07. raccolta «Il Vento e il Fiume» e altre Poesie - 06. raccolta «La Chiave dei Sogni» [«La Clef des Rêves»] - 05. raccolta «Echi e Rompicapi» [«Puzzles and Echoes»] - 04. raccolta «Ballate e altre Cadenze» - 03. raccolta «Frammenti di Memoria» [«Carmina et Fragmenta»] - 02. raccolta «Il puro, l'impuro» [«Kosher / Treyf»] - 01. raccolta «Versi dispersi nel vento»Fabrizio Frosini
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